Dark Mark

[Bad Kangaroo]

if you didn't notice already, THE FREAKING SKULL!@(!&)@!&@)

 

 

loljk ilyaiden

[Volt]

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Jk, I won't spoil anything.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Minus the fact that Snape is killed by Voldemort's snake and he was on the good side the entire time.

[Anthoni]

Haha, I like it Aidan :D

 

 

I just recently watched the first part of the deathly hallows.

[Aidan]

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Jk, I won't spoil anything.

 

Minus the fact that Snape is killed by Voldemort's snake and he was on the good side the entire time.

 

 

It's okay - I already read the books multiple times :thumbsup:

[Thunderbound]

i like it, skull reminds me of dilbert animation.

[Ashton]

Not bad at all. Just keep practicing.

[-Toxine-]

look real good

[pinkcup1]

Weird o.O and wtf is Dark Mark etc

[Alessandro]

The lighting is terrible and just plotted in random places.

 

You have to choose a place where the light is coming from. (Most likely from the air seeing as the sun is in the sky..)

 

This is referring to the random light patches. (If these are from the "sunlight", otherwise, if these light patches are just the pattern on the skin, you'll need to add lighter patches for the "sunlight", the reason for this is because you have darker parts acting as shadows.)

 

 

 

 

I don't have much to say about the skull. Average. Not much effort put into this overall.

 

This piece of work could be done in 20 mins at max.

 

Saying that it took you 3-4 hours is most likely an exaggeration or you're just really bad. :P

(No offence. I have nothing against you.)

 

Another cause of the 3-4 hours could be unplanned work. Just like an essay, it needs to be planned to be perfect.

 

A lot of work to be done, please update this once it's done as I'm curious to see how you can change it based on this constructive criticism.

 

Respect bro.

[Jay]

Don't ask for feedback and then throw the "still has errors" line when people mention something that could use work :P

 

I really like it.

[Fear My K0O]

I like