Ex-TR Leader JLane Rapping

[Anthoni]

He asked me if I'd post this on here for him. Just give it a listen, and comment and stuff. He asks for no RS comments. Thanks :D

 

 

Here's a link to his YouTube channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/JLane561

[Jlane]

thanks Anthoni u da man

 

And yeah guys I'd appreciate if you dont post any comments about RS stuff, Trying to keep it professional no troll stuff u know. Any trolling and flaming if u dont like it can be done on the topic here it doesn't bother me, Just dont want it public on the vid

 

Thanks 4 the Support

 

 

www.youtube.com/user/jlane561 <<< If u like the vid anthoni posted

[Jlane]

also check this one out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YFNOasb5AuU

[OIdwildy]

I hope you get mature feedback, but this is an online scape forum.

I will be monitoring this thread with the report button ready.

[EOP Adam]

that was pretty bad sorry.

[Father Justin]

I hope you get mature feedback, but this is an online scape forum.

I will be monitoring this thread with the report button ready.

thx man jlane is a good rapper, I'll help out too lol.

[Drake-]

I'm not trying to be a ****, but you're not very good. At all.

Monotoned

Bad lyrics

Pretty good beat though

 

Keep working at it

[Range-Grudge]

561 FL?

[Su lc l De]

Not bad really,

Lyrics are.. Okay.

Seem a bit monotone as drake said.

 

But you're not bad, keep at it.

[Furl]

Monotone, not really my kind of rap. But you aren't bad. Keep writing new **** and keep posting it on here. I'd like to see you progress.

[Davld]

ya lane

[Jlane]

Just check my youtube profile out

 

www.youtube.com/user/jlane561

 

 

not trying to keep spamming pw for views lol. update new stuff every other day basically

[Jlane]

561 FL?

 

ya bro palm beach county

[HATTON]

Flow is all messed up, doesn't stick the same. It's not that you switch it up, you just miss the time to come in by half a second or so and it just ruins it. Also, start being more enthusiastic in your songs, the same tone throughout songs just ruins it. Lyrics are okay, but need to get better.

[Franco]

lolque

[Hail-Judaism]

it's alright, not that big of fan of rap anyways

[Loot]

nice. beat is sick too

[Cronic Ko]

I'm not trying to be a ****, but you're not very good. At all.

Monotoned

Bad lyrics

Pretty good beat though

 

Keep working at it

Yeah this guy knows what hes talking bout^ Not?

 

Nice job, i like cloud 9. Better than Drake could ever be.

[Tayyab-]

A lil bit monotone but it's actually pretty decent, Nice :)

[Num Nums]

beat is hot flow/lyrics are basic

 

Its not bad though. Good **** imma go to his youtube to hear more.

[Jasper]

Decent

[-Merk-]

L

[Kopono]

Nice monotone... no swag in your voice? Just saying; the 2nd and 3rd guys got it doe.

[F4T]

battle dj39defence

[Nyk]

Jlane, I love you. <3